Post by Metal Dragon on Sept 13, 2010 2:31:18 GMT -5
Opening Match: Singles Match
Ziu vs. Tyson Smith
Winner: Ziu
Ryan's Sexy Musings: After seeing through the fact that Tyson only ever used first names to describe the action, which is a big turn off when reading, I felt that Ziu's writing flowed better, and described the action well. All in all, a good debut match for Ziu. Tyson, use nicknames/surnames/he/she to make sentences read easier and seem less of a repetitive bore. No offense, of course.
"Death From Above" Ladder Match
-Winner receives a championship opportunity of their choosing within the next three months-
Mighty Man Millson II vs. Skull vs. Stan Dreamer vs. Young Gangsta vs. Matt Violence vs. AJ Scally vs. Ethan Hawke
Winner: Matt Violence
Rawb Sez: You were in the lead the whole time and pretty much sewed it up with the late-match usage of the 48 hour rule. I'd write a paragraph of critique on everyone, but I just spent an hour reading and want a cigarette, so no.
GHW Tag Team Championships
Tag Team Match
Chris Pyro & Alex Night (c) vs. Cut Squad (Kahlan Clarkson & Shawn Dreamer)
Winner and NEW GHW Tag Team Champions: Cut Squad
Ryan's Sexy Musings: Throughout the match, I though it was a tie between Night and Shawn. But the fact that Night had some very minor grammatical errors, and that Shawn matched two very good RPers means that I have to give it to the Cut Squad. Shawn, try and get a new partner. xD
THE CIRCUS IS DEAD. LONG LIVE THE CIRCUS.
GHW Television Championship
Steel Cage Match (Escape)
Reeves (c) vs. Dustin Delta
Winner and NEW TV Champion: Dustin Delta
Rawb Sez: Okay, I'm starting this with a complaint. 17 posts. It took TWO for both of you to be so fucked up that the ref was opening the cage door. I hate to sound like Mr. Boring WWE Universe Guy, but blowing your load with 20-foot falls that early in a match kills it. That being said, you made an indyriffic match, which is why Delta had the edge. Psychology was killed early, so the advantage goes to the guy who keeps the tempo up.
Grudge Match: Singles
Ryan Hughes vs. Vladimir Strife
Winner: Vladimir Strife
Rawb Sez: ...Best Vlad post I've read since 2008. I mean, I didn't read the Despy/Vlad confrontation a few weeks ago, but either way, that stuff showed why you went 50-0. Ryan, you weren't too shabby either, just got caught by Vlad's A-game.
GHW New Age Championship
Three Way Dance
Dominik Santiago (c) vs. Magnus Gunner vs. Hayden HardKore
Winner and NEW New Age Champion: Hayden HardKore
Rawb Sez: Okay, I read this once and couldn't come to a conclusion, then read it again. This match deserved it. Dom deserves a rematch. This match is awesome and both of you should feel awesome. Oh yeah, critique and notes. Uh... Hayden's posts flowed a bit better.
MAIN EVENT: 2010 H-GAMES CHAMPIONSHIP ROUND
GHW King of the Deathmatch Championship
"Anything That Remains" Deathmatch
Thomas Walker (c) vs. Darth That Guy vs. Desperado
Winner and STILL King of the Deathmatch Champion: Thomas Walker
Rawb Sez: I didn't enjoy it as much as the New Age contest, but it was still a good read. All three of you had a few things that I didn't really care for (such as the tooth pull in DTG's last post and the use of the Force Choke in the other two guys' posts, as I feel that move has no place in a PPV main event), but it was still an enjoyable read. I was a big fan of the approach Roadkill took to this match, especially his second post, so I felt he deserved to retain.
Ziu vs. Tyson Smith
Winner: Ziu
Ryan's Sexy Musings: After seeing through the fact that Tyson only ever used first names to describe the action, which is a big turn off when reading, I felt that Ziu's writing flowed better, and described the action well. All in all, a good debut match for Ziu. Tyson, use nicknames/surnames/he/she to make sentences read easier and seem less of a repetitive bore. No offense, of course.
"Death From Above" Ladder Match
-Winner receives a championship opportunity of their choosing within the next three months-
Mighty Man Millson II vs. Skull vs. Stan Dreamer vs. Young Gangsta vs. Matt Violence vs. AJ Scally vs. Ethan Hawke
Winner: Matt Violence
Rawb Sez: You were in the lead the whole time and pretty much sewed it up with the late-match usage of the 48 hour rule. I'd write a paragraph of critique on everyone, but I just spent an hour reading and want a cigarette, so no.
GHW Tag Team Championships
Tag Team Match
Chris Pyro & Alex Night (c) vs. Cut Squad (Kahlan Clarkson & Shawn Dreamer)
Winner and NEW GHW Tag Team Champions: Cut Squad
Ryan's Sexy Musings: Throughout the match, I though it was a tie between Night and Shawn. But the fact that Night had some very minor grammatical errors, and that Shawn matched two very good RPers means that I have to give it to the Cut Squad. Shawn, try and get a new partner. xD
THE CIRCUS IS DEAD. LONG LIVE THE CIRCUS.
GHW Television Championship
Steel Cage Match (Escape)
Reeves (c) vs. Dustin Delta
Winner and NEW TV Champion: Dustin Delta
Rawb Sez: Okay, I'm starting this with a complaint. 17 posts. It took TWO for both of you to be so fucked up that the ref was opening the cage door. I hate to sound like Mr. Boring WWE Universe Guy, but blowing your load with 20-foot falls that early in a match kills it. That being said, you made an indyriffic match, which is why Delta had the edge. Psychology was killed early, so the advantage goes to the guy who keeps the tempo up.
Grudge Match: Singles
Ryan Hughes vs. Vladimir Strife
Winner: Vladimir Strife
Rawb Sez: ...Best Vlad post I've read since 2008. I mean, I didn't read the Despy/Vlad confrontation a few weeks ago, but either way, that stuff showed why you went 50-0. Ryan, you weren't too shabby either, just got caught by Vlad's A-game.
GHW New Age Championship
Three Way Dance
Dominik Santiago (c) vs. Magnus Gunner vs. Hayden HardKore
Winner and NEW New Age Champion: Hayden HardKore
Rawb Sez: Okay, I read this once and couldn't come to a conclusion, then read it again. This match deserved it. Dom deserves a rematch. This match is awesome and both of you should feel awesome. Oh yeah, critique and notes. Uh... Hayden's posts flowed a bit better.
MAIN EVENT: 2010 H-GAMES CHAMPIONSHIP ROUND
GHW King of the Deathmatch Championship
"Anything That Remains" Deathmatch
Thomas Walker (c) vs. Darth That Guy vs. Desperado
Winner and STILL King of the Deathmatch Champion: Thomas Walker
Rawb Sez: I didn't enjoy it as much as the New Age contest, but it was still a good read. All three of you had a few things that I didn't really care for (such as the tooth pull in DTG's last post and the use of the Force Choke in the other two guys' posts, as I feel that move has no place in a PPV main event), but it was still an enjoyable read. I was a big fan of the approach Roadkill took to this match, especially his second post, so I felt he deserved to retain.