Post by JH on Apr 13, 2009 14:47:50 GMT -5
(Continued from: gahwo.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=lockrooms&action=display&thread=579&page=1 )
JH enters that parking lot. Various different cars can been seen to the right of him. He wonders around looking for anything that can spark a memory. After a while of pondering he seems to have remembered something.
JH: I remember how it all happened now...
The camara screen turns black. The words "Flashback to the night JH disappeared" appear on the screen in white.
It then fades back into the parking lot, but this time it is empty. Suddenly to the left of the screen a dorr is slammed open reveiling JH on the other side. He looks down on the floor as he walks slowly to his red Mazda RX8. He his holding his left arm showing that his injury to that left arm from years ago is coming back. He looks tired and stressed.
He sticks the keys into the car door. He suddenly feels a cold chill come down his back. A leather glove grabs his right shoulder. JH turns around and sees 3 man behind him in balacavas and dressed in black. The 2 men slightly behind the man grabbing JH's shoulder are carrying melee weapons. One is carrying a baseball bat while the other has a sandwhich golf club gripped inbetween his hands.
The man holding JH throws him onto the hood of JH's car. The windscreen breaks creating a hole in the middle and cracks begin to form around it. JH is stunned by what is happening. He gets the courage to speak to the attackers.
JH: Who are you?
Man 1: No questions! Stay on that car!
The man pulls out a M9 silenced pistol out of his pocket and points it at JH's head.
Man 1: Now give me the money.
JH starts shaking. He is too scared to reply to the man.
Man 1: I don't have the patience to wait for you. Give me the money!
JH speaks but stutters. His eyes do not move from the gun pointed at him.
JH: I...do not know...what...you are...talking about.
Man 1: You owe us 100,000 dollars. You gambled and lost. Now give me the money.
JH understands what the men want.
JH: I don't have it...I was given a few more weeks.
Man 1: Well the boss is fed up. You keep delaying and now he wants it all back.
JH: I just told you I don't have it.
JH keeps an eye on the gun with fear.
Man 1: Well then we will just have to give you a little encouragement.
The man puts his gun down. JH gets up cautiously. The other men approach JH. JH knows what they will do. He throws a right hook at the man with the baseball bat. The man seems unfazed. JH suddenly sweeps his left leg at the man's knees. The man grabs the leg with his empty hand and throws him backwards.
JH tries to get up but only manages a sitting position. The man swings his baseball bat hitting JH's left shoulder followed by the golf club being plunged at his chest by the other man. They both attack again causing more damage to the injured Fighty fighty person. Pain rushes through the body. JH is in agony. He holds his left arm. The man makes one final swing at JH connecting at his head. JH drops to down facing the floor. He looks lifeless.
Man 1: Lets go. Bring him with us.
The first man opens the doors to JH's Mazda. The other two throw him into the back and get in. They drive off into the streets, the engine roaring.
TBC at a later date
JH enters that parking lot. Various different cars can been seen to the right of him. He wonders around looking for anything that can spark a memory. After a while of pondering he seems to have remembered something.
JH: I remember how it all happened now...
The camara screen turns black. The words "Flashback to the night JH disappeared" appear on the screen in white.
It then fades back into the parking lot, but this time it is empty. Suddenly to the left of the screen a dorr is slammed open reveiling JH on the other side. He looks down on the floor as he walks slowly to his red Mazda RX8. He his holding his left arm showing that his injury to that left arm from years ago is coming back. He looks tired and stressed.
He sticks the keys into the car door. He suddenly feels a cold chill come down his back. A leather glove grabs his right shoulder. JH turns around and sees 3 man behind him in balacavas and dressed in black. The 2 men slightly behind the man grabbing JH's shoulder are carrying melee weapons. One is carrying a baseball bat while the other has a sandwhich golf club gripped inbetween his hands.
The man holding JH throws him onto the hood of JH's car. The windscreen breaks creating a hole in the middle and cracks begin to form around it. JH is stunned by what is happening. He gets the courage to speak to the attackers.
JH: Who are you?
Man 1: No questions! Stay on that car!
The man pulls out a M9 silenced pistol out of his pocket and points it at JH's head.
Man 1: Now give me the money.
JH starts shaking. He is too scared to reply to the man.
Man 1: I don't have the patience to wait for you. Give me the money!
JH speaks but stutters. His eyes do not move from the gun pointed at him.
JH: I...do not know...what...you are...talking about.
Man 1: You owe us 100,000 dollars. You gambled and lost. Now give me the money.
JH understands what the men want.
JH: I don't have it...I was given a few more weeks.
Man 1: Well the boss is fed up. You keep delaying and now he wants it all back.
JH: I just told you I don't have it.
JH keeps an eye on the gun with fear.
Man 1: Well then we will just have to give you a little encouragement.
The man puts his gun down. JH gets up cautiously. The other men approach JH. JH knows what they will do. He throws a right hook at the man with the baseball bat. The man seems unfazed. JH suddenly sweeps his left leg at the man's knees. The man grabs the leg with his empty hand and throws him backwards.
JH tries to get up but only manages a sitting position. The man swings his baseball bat hitting JH's left shoulder followed by the golf club being plunged at his chest by the other man. They both attack again causing more damage to the injured Fighty fighty person. Pain rushes through the body. JH is in agony. He holds his left arm. The man makes one final swing at JH connecting at his head. JH drops to down facing the floor. He looks lifeless.
Man 1: Lets go. Bring him with us.
The first man opens the doors to JH's Mazda. The other two throw him into the back and get in. They drive off into the streets, the engine roaring.
TBC at a later date