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Post by alexsabin on Feb 6, 2011 8:33:29 GMT -5
 Deep within the confines of the hallways in the back room, stands Alex Sabin as a camera pans onto him. A song (above) plays as he turns around slowly looking at the camera for a second then he begins to speak.Alex- Ich bin Alex Sabin, und sie werden alle Lernen zu befürchten, die Sabin!-EOT -OOC translation (I am Alex Sabin, and you will all learn to fear the Sabin!) |
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Post by Brad Windsor on Feb 6, 2011 8:36:27 GMT -5
*Applauds!* THIS IS WIN SIRE! YOU ARE WIN SIRE! YOU WILL BE OUR NEXT CH-CHAMPION! ALL HAIL THE CHAMPION! NOW THIS IS WHERE YOU SAY... THE FUTURE HAS ARRIVED!
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Post by Ryan Hughes on Feb 6, 2011 9:24:37 GMT -5
Disregard her, she's on shrooms. For something that would be a 10 second promo in real life, this works. I'm hoping your full on promos are bigger though.  |
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Post by sonneillon on Feb 6, 2011 13:02:32 GMT -5
OOC: I actually kind of liked it in a sense. Sure, it might not have been really long or whatever, or even unnecessarily descriptive and elaborate, but like Ryan said, it works. I mean, the title is "Alex Sabin Hype", it's just something to hype the guy, so A) good music, B) Readable description of the setting leading up to the guy speaking, C) To-the-point with his speaking. So I'm gonna re-iterate, it's pretty good as I considerate it to be a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of some of the other things I've read (first dates, "funhouses", unfinished druggy scenes...).
Welcome to GHW. And that truly wasn't necessary Kahlan - because hey, at least he didn't make a ring explode, isn't that right Kahlan?
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Post by alexsabin on Feb 6, 2011 13:11:43 GMT -5
To save time and effort of messaging everyone who talks about how short it was. This was based off the old CM punk and shannon moore coming to ECW video promos, 10 seconds at best. And thank you Sonnelion/Belial. By the way this is not my theme song was just background music for promo.
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Post by sonneillon on Feb 6, 2011 13:23:19 GMT -5
I know, still liked the music.
And the Shannon Moore thing is exactly what I was thinking of when I read it. lol
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Post by Brad Windsor on Feb 7, 2011 6:05:38 GMT -5
And that truly wasn't necessary Kahlan - because hey, at least he didn't make a ring explode, isn't that right Kahlan? Of course not. I've done that before. xD |
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Post by Public Enemies on Feb 7, 2011 18:08:51 GMT -5
- I'd like to see another promo, but this time "In The Ring" would be good to see.
- It's nice to see that you DO NOT have a translator with you. That would completely ruin it.
- As mentioned first, I would like to see how well you can 'butter' up the fans, LIVE. Someone may come out during your seminar and ignite a feud to get you going.
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Post by marielaree on Feb 7, 2011 23:21:51 GMT -5
Actually I am his translator in real life as well as on here, Im just slower with filling out paper work i guess ^.^ as for another promo me and him started a bar scene if you want to check out our writing styles, we didnt want to do in ring promos due to the PPV, that is all the Canuck Goddess has spoken! you peasants may return to your lives now ^.^
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