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Post by Mike Lethal on Apr 18, 2007 18:06:35 GMT -5
Mike is walking around backstage seeming happy,looking like he is looking for someone.Todd walks up to him
Todd:Hey Mike great to catch up with you but i have a couple questions for...
Todd is cut off
Mike:Hey Todd have you seen Matt?..O never mind what did you want to know
Todd:Well..I just want to know what you have been up to lately? You haven't been doing very many matches..well any matches lately besides the Hardcore Invitational
Mike looks at Todd with a funny look and smells Todd
Mike:Are you wearing perfume?
Todd looks baffled
Todd:No of course not!
Mike:Well than stop hanging around the girls locker room because you smell like a flower.Well anyways the reason why i haven't been in any matches lately is because I've been training that and i haven't been given many.There is some good news tho me and Matt are supposed to have a tag team match very soon.So if you see Matt can you tell him to talk to me because i have to ask him a couple things..Thanks Todd ill talk to you later
Mike pats Todd on the shoulder and walks off,while hes walking he turns around and looks at Todd and starts laughing.
Todd Scratches his had looking confused and turns around to walk off
The whole crowd cracks up laughing because the camera shows a sticky tab on Todd's back that says i love rainbows with a unicorn on it
End of Thread
OOC:Comments welcome
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Post by Matt Oliveira on Apr 18, 2007 20:40:40 GMT -5
You're getting a good mix of plot support, character development, and a bit of humor to make it better. Good work.
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Post by dmitriy on Apr 18, 2007 21:08:29 GMT -5
a sticky tab on Todd's back that says i love rainbows with a unicorn on it To tell you the truth that wasn't much of a joke.
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Post by Matt Oliveira on Apr 18, 2007 21:15:39 GMT -5
Dmitriy, when you were learning to RP better, did I return any promo ideas or RPs themselves, pinpointing what you did wrong? Of course not. So, don't sink a boat that you were in. I'm trying to make RPers, and I'm trying to make stories and feuds happen. Even the SLIGHTEST of encouragements can help people get better. Always look to a silver lining, man.
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