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Post by darkness on Jan 21, 2007 21:21:14 GMT -5
As the advertisements fade away the camera comes to life again panning around the audience then focuses on the commentators.
Jp: Welcome back from the break ladies and gentleman. We have seen some awesome matches so far and this next one is not going to be any exception. The only difference is this match isn't coming from the the ring , it's coming to you live on camera from the parking lot. Thats right , it's a one of a kind match between Brett Steel and a debut match for Rattlesnake in a one time only car park brawl where the only weapon is 1000 light tubes and what ever vehicle is parked there.
Ray: That sounds just like your type of match Jimmy. Brutal and unforgiving with the possibility of a lot of blood.gahwo.proboards55.com/index.cgi?board=rpcontracts&action=display&thread=1168272063The camera moves from the commentators showing the fans reactions then switches to another camera in the GHW car park. In the car park the camera turns slowly showing the light tubes and various cars around. A Green Jeep Wrangler 4wd with a picture of a rattle snake either side arrives in the car park with Revolution by Judas Priest blasting thru it's speakers so loud that not only the font window is vibrating but it echoes thru the whole car park making car alarms go off. As the Wrangler stops Rattle Snake jumps over the half door landing on his feet showing off his agility to the audience who are watching eagerly awaiting a brutal match and booing with the appearance of Rattle Snake in his debut match.
Lizzie: Introducing the first man in this evenings pre main event , catching a plane all the way from Texas , to fight in a car park 1000 light tube brawl standing at 5 feet 8 inches and weighing in at 235 lbs ...[glow=green,2,300] THE RATTLE SNAKE ...[/glow] Rattle Snake then jumps on to the hood of his jeep and awaits Brett to make an appearance to start the fight. TBc by Brett. |
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Post by KingBear/Brett Steel on Jan 23, 2007 0:21:05 GMT -5
As Rattlesnake waits on the hood of his jeep he hears loud music in the background with a powerful sounding engine behind it. As moments go by the music and noise from the car keep getting louder until a shitty looking yellow gremlim comes screaming through the parking lot. The car comes to a screaching, sliding halt inches from the jeep and Brett pops out of the driver side and quickly jumps over his car and tackles RS into the windsheild of his jeep. He then begins to punch him repeatedly before receiving a kick to the back of his head that sets him off balance before he gets tossed to the ground roughly.
JP: Well this match started off really fast folks...
Ray: That it did JP...
Lizzie: And his opponent, weighing in at 213lbs and standing 5 feet 11 inches tall, Brett STEEL!
JP: I think you were a little late hun...
RS rolls off of his hood and checks on his windsheild before turning to see the feet of Brett dissapearing beneath his jeep. "Hey what are you doing you chicken shit!" RS drops to the ground to check out what Brett is doing only to get a quick boot to the face before Brett finishes his crawl and climbs on top of the jeep. As RS swipes at his nose Brett quickly jumps off of the jeep with an attempted flying headbutt only to receive and elbow to the gut before a quick DDT.
JP: Wow neither Fighty fighty person is half dazed yet... Brett has already recovered from that DDT to the asphalt and the two Fighty fighty persons are locked up.
Ray: Rattlesnake is kinda sexy in a weird way...
Brett starts to feel the effects of the DDT again while in the lockup and RS takes advantage and quickly hip tosses him into the side of the gremlin. RS then quickly begins to lay boots into the midsection of Brett, stomping him further into the side of the gremlin. RS then leans down and picks Brett up and whips him away from the gremlin into the back end of a Hum-Vee setting off the car alarm.
JP: Not the nice cars... Cmon you two!
Ray: Yeah I like that car... I bet the back is really roomy!
RS then walks over to Brett cockily before getting a quick shooting jab to his jaw, sending him stumbling back as Brett slowly makes it to his feet from his hands and knees. He shakes his head a bit and looks around trying to figure out where he is when RS slams his head into the bumper of the Hum-Vee. Brett pops up after the hit only to tumble backwards and lay on the ground in a daze.
JP: Rattlesnake is wasting no time tearing apart the smaller Fighty fighty person in Brett.
Ray: Brett isnt as sexy now... Where are all of the low blows and eye rakes?! Why isnt he being mean!
JP: Maybe he's had a change of heart Ray...
Rattlesnake slowly moves over to one of the many garbage cans full of light tubes and reaches for one but is interrupted by a quick kick to his midsection before receiving a series of quick and powerful jabs to his stomach and ribs, sending him stumbling backwards slowly as Brett continues to onslaught of punches. RS goes to block a punch to his ribs but Brett turns it into a very painful elbow shot to the head, sending RS stumbling backwards before he falls down to the ground in pain.
JP: Brett is wasting no time with this opportunity... Locking in a Boston Crab on RS right now... I doubt he'll tap... I bet he's just trying to weaken Rattlesnake down a bit.
Ray: DID YOU SEE ALL THOSE MUSCLES?!
Brett wrenches on the boston crab hard before releasing the hold and helping RS to his feet. He then moves in to Belly to Belly RS but RS stops the move by locking his foot with Bretts before performing a Belly to Belly Suplex of his own, slamming Brett into the asphalt in pain as well as slamming his own back into the asphalt.
JP: I dont know who's going to win at this point...
Ray: MUSCLES!!!
TBC
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Post by darkness on Jan 23, 2007 5:00:59 GMT -5
RS gets to his feet first having slightly more endurance and less impact from the move , altho he can still feel a slight stinging sensation in his lower back. Walking over to Brett who is just struggling to his knee's. RS goes to put Brett in a head lock but Brett realizes what he's doing and reverses it with a back elbow smash then Brett capitalizes putting RS into a head lock of his own trying to wear down the bigger opponent.
Ray: I'm starting to really like this match Jimmy.
Jp: You just like the view more like it Ray !!
While Brett has RS in a head lock RS picks him up to slam him into the concrete but yet again Brett manages to use his experience and out think RS by nailing RS in the chest with a boot taking the wind out of his lungs. Falling back to his knees trying to gather himself again RS starts driving his elbow into Brett slightly picking him up off the ground with each blow. Brett attempts to tighten his headlock but to no use as RS uses his strength to over whelm Brett and throw him towards a parked BMW denting the door.
Ray: Noooo .. not the luxury cars Rattle Snake .. pick on that horrible looking Gremlin. {trails off laughing to himself}
Jp: That won't do any good Ray , they can't hear you no matter how much you yell at them. At least it's not some twisted fruity comment that you always tend to make.
Brett bounces solidly off the car door winding him and making him fall awkwardly on his side screaming in pain. Rattle Snake grinning at the damage and pain he has caused Brett walks over to a metal bin and takes one of he light tubes. Swinging the light tube in the air feeling the balance of the light tube in his hand. Unexpectedly Brett puts his pain aside and jumps up delivering a swift kick out of no where hitting the light tube and smashing it across the bare waist of RS making him jump back in shock.
TBC Brett.
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Post by KingBear/Brett Steel on Jan 23, 2007 13:55:48 GMT -5
Brett grins as RS picks up another light tube to return the favor to Brett, he swings it for his head but Brett throws his gloved fist up and shatters the light tube and turns his head before delivering a quick spin kick to the side of RS. RS tumbles sideways and spins around to regain his balance and return the attack but Brett comes at him with a full on shoulder tackle, planting RS into the side of a green Mustang, shattering the passenger side window.
Ray: Leave the cars alone!
JP: Didnt I already tell you they cant hear you?! *smacks Ray*
Brett slowly pulls himself off of RS and moves over to the garbage can of light tubes, he grabs one in each hand and begins spinning them in his hands like swords. After a bit of twirling Brett turns to RS and runs at him, he aims to smash the tubes into the sides of RS' head but RS ducks down and the tubes shatter against eachother, raining glass down on top of him before he's able to deliver a low blow to Brett and sidewalk slam him.
JP: Wow what a move by Rattlesnake there... I bet Brett is going to be feeling that one tomorrow...
Ray: Oh no! It looks like Brett's back is cut open because of all of that glass. I'll kiss it and make it better.
Brett writhes on the asphalt in pain for a bit before receiving a punch to the ribs of RS. RS attempts to punch him again but Brett quickly grabs his arm and throws him over onto the asphalt next to him. He then rolls over and quickly attempts to lock in a sleeper hold but much to his painful surprise, RS bites down on his forearm as he's attempting the sleeper and Brett screams out in pain before giving him an elbow to the back of the head.
JP: That was dirty!
Ray: My kind of guy!
Brett climbs to his feet and rubs furiously at the bite marks on his arm, giving RS some time to recover.
((Sorry it's short...))
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Post by darkness on Jan 24, 2007 7:10:05 GMT -5
Holding the back of his head recovering with a smirk on his face at the reaction of biting Brett RS strolls over to Brett who is still holding his arm and boots him in the side. Slumping over to his other side Brett plays more injured than he is and waits for another boot from RS grabbing his foot and twisting his leg in to a ankle lock.
Ray : What is the go with Brett Jimmy? Is he turning face or just going soft ? .. by now he would of taken out a new up start like Rattle Snake.
Jp: I have no idea Ray .. I'm as confused as you are about Brett's new tactics.
Giving up on the ankle lock that he used to pull RS to the ground Brett stomps RS a few times and grabs his arm dragging him over to the mustang and opens the door. Before he can react any further RS brings up his hand and grabs Brett by the nuts and twists making Brett scream out really loud in pain before dropping to his knee's.
Ray: I like the tactics of this new guy Jimmy.
Jp: You would .. but that was a blatant lo blow , he shouldn't be able to get away with that.
Rattle Snake then grabs Brett and slams his head into the side of the Mustang. Managing to reverse the beating Brett grabs the door while rolling out of the way and slams it in to the legs of RS making him trip back wards. Getting to his feet Brett struggles to pick him up and smashes him on his knee with a nasty gut buster winding RS.
Ray: Come on muscles .. get back to your feet.
Jp: I never thought i would even imagine saying this , but I hope Brett can win this match. I really don't like Rattle Snake.
While Brett has RS on the ground he drops a knee to his head a couple times , then he grabs another light tube and whacks it over RS head with it exploding sending white dust every where and glass scattering all over the place while cutting into the side of RS face.
Ray: {shrieks} .. please Brett don't hit him with that again , you will mess up his face.
Jp: {smacks Ray again making him whimper} I told you Ray , they can't hear you so stop trying to get there attention.
TBC
ooc: is ok papa bear mines not that long a reply either.
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Post by KingBear/Brett Steel on Jan 26, 2007 1:03:43 GMT -5
RS screams out in pain and begins swiping at his face trying to rid his flesh of the slicing agony of the glass. Brett slowly stumbles backwards and leans up against the side of the Hum-Vee, allowing RS some time to recover from the attack as blood droplets run down the side of his face. RS stands and looks over to Brett who nods lightly before moving forward, the two lock up and RS quickly breaks up the lock with an eye gouge. JP: Oh my! What a venom strike by RS... That is so cruel... How is Brett going to recover from this? Ray: Yay! Wrench that hold! As RS is wrenching the anaconda vice on Brett, Brett screams out in pain, waiving his free arm around until he can grab hold of the bumper of a nearby car. RS notices this and yanks him away from the vehicle and wrenches the hold more, applying more pressure to the arm of Brett trying to make him submit. JP: This doesnt look good for Brett... Ray: Yay... Take him out muscles! As RS continues to apply the anaconda vice to a weakening Brett, Brett gets an idea in his head and feels around for a glass shard, he finds one and grips it tight before jabbing it into the forearm of RS, slicing his own hand open but forcing RS to release the hold in pain. Brett then rolls away from RS and slowly stumbles to his feet, holding his arm lightly before stretching it a bit and trying to move it without pain. JP: What a desperation attempt there from Brett... Never expected to see Brett doing something like that only as a last resort... Ray: Aww... He's bleeding... I should go out there and make it better... RS slowly stands up after pulling the shard from his forearm only to receive a quick Stainless Nail from Brett who then quickly scrambles around and performs one of his trademark moves, The Anti Vibe Hammer. JP: Oh my! What a move... Destroying the knee and ankle of his opponent at the same time! It seems like this is just going to be a submission match instead of a regular match folks! Ray: Get off of him you bully! JP: THEY CANT HEAR YOU!!!! Brett soon releases the Ankle Lock from RS and helps him to his feet only to get knocked back and receive a painful Kesagiri chop. Brett grips at his neck lightly as RS runs in and circles around him putting him into a quick arm lock. Brett feels him wrenching and they dance a bit as Brett tries to avoid the pain before he reverses the hold into an arm lock of his own before taking a firemans carry to the asphalt. JP: This really is an amazingly technical match... I give my props to either of these awe inspiring Fighty fighty persons! Ray: I'd give my props to Rattlesnake too... JP: Did you just? Ray: No.. JP: Yes you did... Ray: Nu uh... TBC ((Again short... I didnt even want to post  )) |
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Post by darkness on Jan 26, 2007 1:35:36 GMT -5
ok .. i won;t reply then you don'thave to reply
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Post by KingBear/Brett Steel on Jan 27, 2007 1:00:49 GMT -5
LOL Dont be lazy I dont even know if I'll be on tomorrow Unless you're having issues... |
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Post by darkness on Jan 27, 2007 7:28:54 GMT -5
i am an issue |
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Post by darkness on Jan 28, 2007 20:33:39 GMT -5
Rattle Snake sitting on the ground holding his knee as Brett lays on the asphalt gasping for air with a stinging sensation going up and down his spine. Using the time to recover Rattle Snake goes to drop a fist on Brett , but he moves making Rattle Snake connect with the solid concrete before screaming in pain and holding his fist. Brett takes advantage by sending his knee into Rattle Snakes cheek almost breaking a tooth free , Brett then grabs Rattle Snakes arm and attempts a crossface and at first Rattle Snake resists starting an elbow and forearm battle. Eventually Brett gets the better of Rattle Snake with a missed elbow shot to Brett's face being returned with a forearm to the neck.
Ray: What a struggle by both men that was amazing at the determination. One trying to get a submission hold and the other trying to avoid getting into it.
Jp: And now Brett has that hold locked in tight , I'm not sure if Rattle Snake can hold on here with out tapping.
Leaning on Rattle Snake tightening his arm putting every thing he can in to the crossface, Brett gets a grin on his face thinking he has the win as Rattler brings his hand down. When Rattle Snake brings his arm down he stops just before he taps the asphalt. Once again Rattle Snake bites on Brett's hand as hard as possible making Brett yell out in pain giving Rattle Snake time to move away and hold his neck.
Almost every one in the audience stand on the feet and start booing the titantron from such a despicable move from Rattle Snake.
Ray: Well that worked Jimmy ... you know I like someone who can play a little rough !!
Jp: Oh thats enough Ray !! ... That was a blatant illegal move where was the ref , he should of disqualified Rattle Snake.
While Brett is distracted holding his bleeding hand from a cheap shot Rattle Snake runs up to Brett smashing him with a short clothesline before jumping on the top of Brett with a series of punches to his face. Trying to raise his arms to block the punches Brett changes his mind and begins to elbow Rattle Snake in the ribs. Stopping the punches Rattle Snake gets back to his feet just as Brett takes the opportunity and snatches Rattlers leg to try another ankle lock.
Ray: I wouldn't mind if muscles mounted me ...
JP: Thats just disgusting Ray ... you kiss your mom with that mouth ?? ... now look what you have done !! I have lost my train of thought and what i was going to say.
Ray breaks out in to laughter before he receives a smack to the head from Jimmy who is getting pissed off.
Attempting to manipulate the leg of Rattle Snake and twist the ankle even more as if he's trying to break it , Brett gets kicked to the back of the knee until it finally gives out on him and he looses balance. Letting go of the move Brett reaches out for a near by car to get his balance again just as Rattle Snake picks him up and walks to the front of some small car that resembles a shopping trolley with an engine.
Jp: Not the cars hood , almost anything but that you could break his back ....
Before anything else could be said or done Brett first tries to resist but to no avail as Rattle Snake lifts him high in a military press before slamming Brett down so hard on the Mazda's hood it shatters the front windscreen sending glass all thru the front seats of the car with the hood almost caving in. Brett squirms on the hood in pain as his spine connects to the aluminum of the hood.
TBC.
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Post by Hayabusa on Jan 31, 2007 0:39:17 GMT -5
match over
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