Post by Matt Oliveira on Jun 17, 2008 19:33:48 GMT -5
Dark match
TheMetalhead vs. A Wray
Winner: The Metalhead
Notes: It was interesting to read. Both of you understand the core and concepts of RP, and I really liked the colour-coding you brought in for who led the match at certain times. One thing that was shown is your ability to balance and keep matches even, much rather than insane powerposting. Your next step is to turn:
"Metalhead walks up to A Wray and throws him back into the ring." into "Metalhead grits his teeth brutely and grips A Wray by the neck, shoving him under the bottom rope and back into the squared circle" if you get my point.
Match #1
Bud Whiser vs. Dominik Santiago
Winner: Dominik Santiago
Notes: Not bad for a debut, Bud. You had excellent use of commentary and used them well throughout the match, but Santiago had the experience or grasp of a flow and consistency. I'd really like to see the effort you use in Hyper and Colin be transferred to the fighting moreso, and the commentators used more to fine-line and give the post a little more "oomph" if you will. Well done to the both of you.
Match #2
Skorpio vs. Psycho Savage
Winner: Skorpio by no-show
Notes: Good job at updating your character, Skorpio. Although a Fighty fighty person wouldn't say "I got a new gimmick", it's important that you've used your limited opportunity to the most it could be.
Match #3
Evan vs. Damien
Winner: Evan "Fallen Angel"
Notes: Rather straight-forward by amount, better luck next time Damien. Good luck, Evan.
Match #4
Emblem vs. Brian Commonwealth
Winner: Brian Commonwealth
Notes: This basically came down to flow and quality. Both of you were able to use some sort of storytelling in your wrestling to bring it out of that "Random match #42-B" category. Brian, you provided a good use of your manager for some stability and were able to provide one or two events that I haven't personally seen lately -if ever (in reference to the steel step boot). Realism isn't a problem for either of you, your repetoires work well with standard wrestling matches, and applause for your efforts with a shortened amount of personal time.
Match #5 - No Disqualification
Rhino vs. Hayden
Winner: Hayden Hardkore
Notes: A good fight, both competitors have the content aspect down quite well. The biggest decision in Hayden's favor was, in my opinion, a well-placed spot near the end. Both of you use the commentators to enhance both you and your rival, and flow and the "mental picture" was overall decent. Rhino, for improvement I'd suggest a quick proofreading in case of spelling or grammar mistakes, or even if you think of a way to explain yourself better. Lick your wounds gentlemen, and reflect, because I hope this goes somewhere.
Main Event
Lrey, Trickshot & Amanda vs Reeves, Gnarff & Desperado
Winners: No Contest (in RP)
Notes: A bit of a shame this thing went down, concerning participation. I won't condemn you one bit about your effort, Amanda, you still came out swinging.
TheMetalhead vs. A Wray
Winner: The Metalhead
Notes: It was interesting to read. Both of you understand the core and concepts of RP, and I really liked the colour-coding you brought in for who led the match at certain times. One thing that was shown is your ability to balance and keep matches even, much rather than insane powerposting. Your next step is to turn:
"Metalhead walks up to A Wray and throws him back into the ring." into "Metalhead grits his teeth brutely and grips A Wray by the neck, shoving him under the bottom rope and back into the squared circle" if you get my point.
Match #1
Bud Whiser vs. Dominik Santiago
Winner: Dominik Santiago
Notes: Not bad for a debut, Bud. You had excellent use of commentary and used them well throughout the match, but Santiago had the experience or grasp of a flow and consistency. I'd really like to see the effort you use in Hyper and Colin be transferred to the fighting moreso, and the commentators used more to fine-line and give the post a little more "oomph" if you will. Well done to the both of you.
Match #2
Skorpio vs. Psycho Savage
Winner: Skorpio by no-show
Notes: Good job at updating your character, Skorpio. Although a Fighty fighty person wouldn't say "I got a new gimmick", it's important that you've used your limited opportunity to the most it could be.
Match #3
Evan vs. Damien
Winner: Evan "Fallen Angel"
Notes: Rather straight-forward by amount, better luck next time Damien. Good luck, Evan.
Match #4
Emblem vs. Brian Commonwealth
Winner: Brian Commonwealth
Notes: This basically came down to flow and quality. Both of you were able to use some sort of storytelling in your wrestling to bring it out of that "Random match #42-B" category. Brian, you provided a good use of your manager for some stability and were able to provide one or two events that I haven't personally seen lately -if ever (in reference to the steel step boot). Realism isn't a problem for either of you, your repetoires work well with standard wrestling matches, and applause for your efforts with a shortened amount of personal time.
Match #5 - No Disqualification
Rhino vs. Hayden
Winner: Hayden Hardkore
Notes: A good fight, both competitors have the content aspect down quite well. The biggest decision in Hayden's favor was, in my opinion, a well-placed spot near the end. Both of you use the commentators to enhance both you and your rival, and flow and the "mental picture" was overall decent. Rhino, for improvement I'd suggest a quick proofreading in case of spelling or grammar mistakes, or even if you think of a way to explain yourself better. Lick your wounds gentlemen, and reflect, because I hope this goes somewhere.
Main Event
Lrey, Trickshot & Amanda vs Reeves, Gnarff & Desperado
Winners: No Contest (in RP)
Notes: A bit of a shame this thing went down, concerning participation. I won't condemn you one bit about your effort, Amanda, you still came out swinging.
